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'Eyeless in Eternity...' by ~Elmara:iconElmara:



Snaking across ivory sheets
Sleek ebony river

Her hair unbound…

Midnight tresses sighing
Across his arm

Sweet aching misery…

Touching: eyelash to eyelash
Eyeless in eternity

Breathing, breath in
Giving, give in

Lethargic and attendant
On each other dependant

And Beauty their deity
Shaken by Beauty
And Beauty by them

Shaken...

Mortal divinity

Awaken…
©2006-2009 ~Elmara
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:iconelmara:
*runs around gathering all the stuff you throw around* *huff puff* good wat to burn calories.. *gasp* *collapses* :D

thanks man.. your praise always humbles me.. :hug:

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"Ninja Stars: The perfect weapon for home defense should you be attacked by a blind quadriplegic"

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:jedi: Dont Worry...Sith Happens :jedi:
:iconelmara:
thanks bro.. glad you liked it even though its not one of my best ones.. =[ :glomp:

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"Ninja Stars: The perfect weapon for home defense should you be attacked by a blind quadriplegic"

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:jedi: Dont Worry...Sith Happens :jedi:
:iconscherzando:
I like the "touching: eyelash to eyelash" line. Gives a very nice picture:)

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"And so all love is found to be random acts of vandalism, shocking the body and shattering the heart." ~Tsaian
:iconelmara:
thanks so much.. :hug:

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"Ninja Stars: The perfect weapon for home defense should you be attacked by a blind quadriplegic"

Your comments will help...

:jedi: Dont Worry...Sith Happens :jedi:
:iconpan-neverland86:
Hey its nice... and my nice = ur best....lol :D
:hug: tc lil one...!!

And all of ur work is great... after all one cant top perfection, ;) hai nah?

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Perhaps in the years to come,
There would be words, even one,
To express how I feel for thee,
But I guess for now- let this be...
:iconelmara:
thankyou.. =] im glad you enjoyed reading it.. :hug:

--
"Ninja Stars: The perfect weapon for home defense should you be attacked by a blind quadriplegic"

Your comments will help...

:jedi: Dont Worry...Sith Happens :jedi:
:iconelmara:
oh man.. im actually blushing.. shut the hell up rite now! go on dis me.. dis me DIS ME! :P :glomp:

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"Ninja Stars: The perfect weapon for home defense should you be attacked by a blind quadriplegic"

Your comments will help...

:jedi: Dont Worry...Sith Happens :jedi:
:iconally3:
It's beautiful! :)
:iconelmara:
thankyou.. :nod:

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:jedi: Dont Worry...Sith Happens :jedi:

The Poetry.. That comes from the squaring off between.. And the circling is worth it.. Finding beauty in the dissonance.. -Tool
:iconsugarplumfairy123:
I LOVE THIS.. its nice to think ppl other than me think these thoughts..

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darkness is the new light it hides what you don't want to see- if you want to see something badly enough you can see through the shadows

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