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'Honeysugarbaby, Bee..' by ~Elmara:iconElmara:



You are         a         bee
buzzing         in my skull
caught   in my nebulous
silver lithium city-scapes.

I'm afraid to sneeze in case I let you out
I hold my breath when my nose    itches.

I won't let you go because I like the way you
         bump
against the walls of my      cranial          vault.

         A certain
(thump)
                nocturnal
(thump)
                        secret
(thump)
                               bee, all my own,
                                    buzzing against the gnashing teeth
                 of coldly cutting gears    spinning in my metal     garden.

                                                   Stay, bee.

                                                    You are
              my last dream of flowers blooming here in rust and steel
                                        my last hope of spring.
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Author's Comments

I wish I played cello so I COULD SMASH ONE INTO YOUR FACE AND KNOCK SOME SEMBLANCE OF HUMANITY INTO YOU, too.

:giggle:

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:iconpuremind:
Dude, this one rocks \m/

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Wash away our sins

*VampireWriters *PlagueConcilium
:iconelmara:
:blush:

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The Poetry.. That comes from the squaring off between.. And the circling is worth it.. Finding beauty in the dissonance.. -Tool

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A SUPERAWESOMEPOEMFROMELMARA

And I wish I had a cello too. I wouldn't need to break it over your head though :heart:

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The sleep of reason produces monsters - Fransisco Goya
:iconlocked-in-the-floor:
haha What else are cellos for? =P

Awesome poem, by the way. I can say I've felt this way before quite a few times.

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~Believer, believe it or not, you'll know,
When it ends and how it goes~
:iconelmara:
indeed ;)

thanks very much :hug:

--
The Poetry.. That comes from the squaring off between.. And the circling is worth it.. Finding beauty in the dissonance.. -Tool

*VampireWriters *PoetryPlease *Writers-Workshop ~pakdeviants *ScribeSanctuary
:iconelmara:
cut me open in a thousand different way with catgut strings though :glomp:

--
The Poetry.. That comes from the squaring off between.. And the circling is worth it.. Finding beauty in the dissonance.. -Tool

*VampireWriters *PoetryPlease *Writers-Workshop ~pakdeviants *ScribeSanctuary
:iconashpunxsta:
x.x cello~

ah~

reminds me of August Rush...x.x sucha nice movie...

:heart: amazing as alwaysz Mara! ^^

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Ash .... = ^_^ = ... hmmm...impossible iz nuthin...cuz nuthinz impossible....itz the possibilitiez tht make all the possiblez impossible...wich iz impossible itself... O_o?...OR DUZ IT!?!?! @_@???
:iconelmara:
thanks very much ash! :glomp: MAARY ME! Leave that darn Lord Barbarius! :XD:

--
The Poetry.. That comes from the squaring off between.. And the circling is worth it.. Finding beauty in the dissonance.. -Tool

*VampireWriters *PoetryPlease *Writers-Workshop ~pakdeviants *ScribeSanctuary
:iconashpunxsta:
O.O

xD

we're alrdy married? =P

we got married when u commented on my pic and proposed..

haw~ :hug:

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Ash .... = ^_^ = ... hmmm...impossible iz nuthin...cuz nuthinz impossible....itz the possibilitiez tht make all the possiblez impossible...wich iz impossible itself... O_o?...OR DUZ IT!?!?! @_@???

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