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31
hai,
haiku.
I give up.

30
escapism:
chocolate chip ice-cream
with Johnny Depp.

29
wringing hands--
syllable counting
grows frustrating.

28
cleaning out old cds--
cringe at every
N’Sync album.

27
man smashes cola-glass
on table.
Breaks down; weeps.

26
passing along on
sweaty palms;
pharmacology flash cards.

25
wind-chime hanging glumly
upon humidity.

24
scratching forearm
scars
nonchalantly.

23
snatches of a foreign
melody
taking me back
home.

22
PoliceOfficerWalrusMan--
pants held up
against all reason.

21
late afternoon speeding;
next to me
Mum smiles.

20
re-reading
old emails;
I try not to call her.

19
sliding sitar song
singing
‘Wish You Were Here’.

18
bleached photos--
the sun finally
outshines you.

17
birthday cards
burning in
the waste bin.

16
her secret smile--
blinding from behind
rain-windows.

15
long hair,
sparkle of sweat;
strumming guitar chords.

14
mister intense--
headphones book-end his brain.

13
sunshine,  lemonade;
sampling summer on your lips.

12
inverse ocean
hung over Islamabad;
monsoon.

11
metal whale--
beached by the roadside.

10
Bloodlust dance!
mosquito
versus
me.

9
Remedial courses;
why did I not study before?!

8
YouTube voyeur;
sordid late-night confessions.

7
salt-crusted pores;
awaiting monsoon.

6
basketball moon;
midnight games
on asphalt.

5
Scottish Isles
wreathed in fog-
vacation dreams.

4
sedative library sounds;
your quiet breathing
keeps me awake.

3
switching table-lamp
on-off
on-off
on-off
over unread textbooks.

2
metallic slink;
his Rolex slides down
her pale wrist.

1
foot fetish-
salivating all summer long.
©2009 ~Elmara
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For July Haikuthon being hosted by `Iscariot-Priest

Stamp created by the wonderful `Memnalar

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I never actually finished this on time due to collegial insanity but I did the remainder of the haikus anyway because I hate leaving things incomplete.

Actually that's a big, fat lie. I'm the laziest sod on the planet and the only reason I finished this was because ~hassansagheer did this awesome version of 'Wish You Were Here' on GarageBand that just compelled me to write after ages. Here's to you, mon ami. :salute:

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My personal favorite was number eleven. These are the types of metaphors I would like to make casually some day.

--
"Everything should be as simple as it can be, and no simpler."
- Albert Einstein
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trying! people in class have started giving me the evil eye 'cause i keep counting syllables under my breath :fear:

--
what we choose is never what we really need


*VampireWriters|=PoetryPlease|*Writers-Workshop|=ScribeSanctuary
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#12 is really nice - great image. I like the upside down feeling of it.

#6 has a nice sense of juxtaposition.

Nice work over all. I have had a lot of fun writing and reading haiku this month.

:)

--
"We are intent on reducing art to its simplest expression, which is love." (Andre Breton)

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