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-- "Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind." - Dr. Seuss
This is really striking as a visual poetry piece. Great composition. Again, the repetition and simplicity of your visual poetry (the poems that...become visual poetry) are strangely soothing and effective, even in this piece, when the topic is not really an optimistic one.
The last lines of "someone in my mind" seem somewhat cliche and not the strongest way to end the piece, and it worries me that I can't figure out how the title fits with the idea created through the poem. It just seems like two completely different emotions.
Regardless, this was thought-provoking, and thanks for writing. J.
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"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior." - Catullus
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Daily Literature Deviations is a group that is dedicated to bringing literature to the forefront of the deviantArt community. We attempt to accomplish this by daily featuring Literature artists from around the community that deserve the recognition, but are not getting it.
Each day we will feature 5 deviations from the Literature categories in a News Article. In order to support the artists that we feature, we ask that you the news article as well as check out the individual pieces. We understand that each day you may not be able to check out each and every one of the pieces, everyone has their own things going on. We just ask that you make an attempt to help support the growing Literature community.
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The Poetry.. That comes from the squaring off between.. And the circling is worth it.. Finding beauty in the dissonance.. -Tool
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And I find it kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
The dreams in which Im dying are the best Ive ever had
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The Poetry.. That comes from the squaring off between.. And the circling is worth it.. Finding beauty in the dissonance.. -Tool
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"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who
mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind."
- Dr. Seuss
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wow! thanks so much! really honored and appreciative.
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The Poetry.. That comes from the squaring off between.. And the circling is worth it.. Finding beauty in the dissonance.. -Tool
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Try to be Cool, Look like a Fool
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The Poetry.. That comes from the squaring off between.. And the circling is worth it.. Finding beauty in the dissonance.. -Tool
The last lines of "someone in my mind" seem somewhat cliche and not the strongest way to end the piece, and it worries me that I can't figure out how the title fits with the idea created through the poem. It just seems like two completely different emotions.
Regardless, this was thought-provoking, and thanks for writing.
J.
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"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris.
Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."
- Catullus
your words have really started to change my own perception of my work.
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Murder your darlings
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