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Sepia Evening Cinema by ~Elmara:iconElmara:



The heart is mighty above all things.
And no where will you know this better
than when you see this girl for the first time
and hold in your mind a picture of her

burning as a fever behind your closed
eyelids, night after restless night when moths
run into flames and fires, are consumed by suns in-
side lightbulbs. All around you the world seems

dim, seems less than it is as when
she is slowly unfolding before
your hungry eyes. Her name is a pounding fist
upon your heart, setting your ears ringing

with sweetly succulent vowels of rounding,
lilting love-melodies, sweetly haunting phantoms
emerging whole from cavernous mouths as
lipstick-shaped lexis that reverberate

across the panorama of this old television screen
this urine-stained linen sheet
that doubles as a neighborhood
cinema screen, sharing our communal

dreams. Your tongue could care less
if it burnt by this stale cigarette or the blue-smoke taste
of her huntress hair. You could care less,
you could wager less, you could

die for less. Your heart is a warrior;
it is mighty above all else. It knows-
everything is always about the girl.
It’s always about the girl.

So when you see them running after you
with guns, with swords, with fiery
spit-firing anti-aircraft missiles;
know-

bad guys can’t shoot for shit
your friendly neighborhood mutant/ super-
human (despite being divinely conflicted)
will always rescue your faith in mankind

and it will always rain on your parade
only when you feel like it
only when her mascara is waterproof
and saying (with grit teeth jaw clenched eyes on the sky)

‘I’m ready’

and all your dreams will play out Technicolor-true
and not a hair will be out of place
not a tear will go to waste;
all your long roads will lead up to this place,

this warm smile and the promise of her embrace,
this girl you could spit at dragons for, this girl
you could murder a brother for. I promise you, Shanti-goddess-music
will play (always) when you reach out to touch her…



and I speak these words into sieved
mouthpieces of strange phones set in forgotten
rain-rusted booths. I have not dialed the number
of the party I desire to reach because

I hope to catch you breathing
on the other end and know somewhere, you
too, are holding a phone next to your ear, listening
to the dial-tone and ‘Please enter the number

of the party you desire to reach’
. I wish, like a fool,
I could hear your voice saying ‘Hey’ even though
I have not dialed a number,
I could not dial a number, even

if I had one for you. Your silence
keeps me gambling with words
that spill into such lachrymose promises
I will live for you I will wait for you I will be here for I will be for you I will die for you

because
the heart is mighty above all else
this heart that strives for the girl
its always about the girl, you see,

its always about the girl.
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Seriously, I'm as perplexed as you are.

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:iconcassielthelostsoul:
Very nice, and it makes alot of sense to me

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~It's Not What You Look At That Matters, It's What You See. We Know What We Are, But Not What We Might Be~
:iconcassielthelostsoul:
The language you used definitely caught my attention, it's a style I haven't seen before, but the thing I loved most was the ending lines

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~It's Not What You Look At That Matters, It's What You See. We Know What We Are, But Not What We Might Be~
:iconh-bogard:
Wow, just wow! I couldn't stop reading start-to-finish. How long did you spend on this?

--
Love is not a victory march
Its a cold and its a broken hallelujah.
:iconelmara:
about a month. strangely it managed the stay the same length as the original although the format kept changing. :D

thanks sensei! :salute:

--
what we choose is never what we really need


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:iconpuremind:
O_O Another name steal! but seriously i never could take that movie ever since the title morphed into "A Mighty Fart" in my head, angelina jolie or no. =_=

This one is wayyy better, a 8.5/9 out of 10ner. Very intimate and personal use of imagery and emotions, concepts and view points that abruptly jump around corners and startle with their surprisingness...

Your best piece so far in my opinion since slices. Keep it up ^^

( a very metaphysical, sublime approach to the nature of romance and reality, piercing in its...ah...sublime approach to the...ahh..beauty of the spaces between the....corners...ahh...of the galactice ooga boogas :S)

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Wash away our sins

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:iconelmara:
Thankly muchly :D

"So what you're saying is that I write poetry because underneath my mean callous heartless exterior I really just want to be loved," the Vogon said. He paused. "Is that right?"

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what we choose is never what we really need


*VampireWriters|=PoetryPlease|*Writers-Workshop|=ScribeSanctuary
:iconevcfenix:
that is one long piece that is both a blessing and a curse (in my case anyways). blessing because it is so damn good with the innumerable imageries, analogies and emotions. i loved it when the piece picked up pace and is induced with that sense of such determination and hope from stanzas 8 to 12. well done.
however, the "curse" part comes in in such a way that due to the various images, everything kind of got befuddled in my head and it feels like the piece is going on for far too long. but that does not stop me from reading and re-reading.
i found the ending to be a tad unexpected with the 'it's always about the girl' line. pleasantly surprised with that. indeed it is true.
a thoroughly good read and a fine piece of work.
:thumbsup: :+fav:

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