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-bethlehem- by ~Elmara:iconElmara:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Visual Poetry

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`She puts the seeds in me
plant this dying tree
she's a burning string
and I'm just the ashes
- Marilyn Manson 'In The Shadow Of The Valley Of Death '

Thanks to :iconresurgere: and :icondholms: [link]

Original poem: [link]

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:iconelmara:
~Elmara Mar 11, 2008, 9:57:57 AM
Yep, got it. Second stanza, lines 2 and 3. Thanks for pointing them out. :)

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:jedi: Dont Worry...Sith Happens :jedi:

The Poetry.. That comes from the squaring off between.. And the circling is worth it.. Finding beauty in the dissonance.. -Tool
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~K-Sajid Dec 18, 2008, 12:51:34 AM
Good marriage of visual art and poetry. I think the poem itself is wonderful too. One of the first things I hate about some poetry is how amiss and disorganized they are; while it works for a fair few, it doesn't for all. I like how your poem progresses, there's is no randomness. It's well thought out, and not half-assed :lol: It's good to see people putting effort behind work. It's not very common these days.
And a silly reason I like this is, I like saying Bethlehem aloud :lol: so yes, lucky for you, you had me at Bethlehem.
By the way, are you a fellow person interested in the occult and goddess worship? Tell me you are =D

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~K-Sajid Dec 18, 2008, 7:28:28 PM
Pleased to meet you =)

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~poshlost Jan 6, 2009, 8:06:24 AM
This is incredibly soothing in its simplicity. Plays well on the ears, I must say.

Thanks for writing,
J.

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"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris.
Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."
- Catullus
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~Elmara Jan 7, 2009, 8:59:09 AM
Thanks very much. It's an oldie but it has aged well. :)

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Murder your darlings

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~surfpunk1 Jan 8, 2009, 12:31:21 AM
Classics never die, they just need to be reminded. :)
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